Featuring A-class talent, it’s not a shock that most of the acting in The Trinity River Plays is stellar. The writing, in discrete clumps, is laugh-out-loud funny and smart. But for all of this, the production feels like a photograph without a focal point. The audience has the sensation of many lives, many issues, many cultural details, all of it presented by great actors. But there is an emotional disconnect, and it’s difficult to understand, at a gut level, where this show really wants us to look, or what it wants us to feel.

Theater Review: The Trinity River Plays Has Pulitzer Pedigree, But Can It Overcome Its Emotional Disconnect?

Rating

A

Location

Wyly Theater 2100 Ross Ave. Dallas, TX 75201

Dates

Nov 5 thru Dec 5

Not to jinx it, but Regina Taylor’s The Trinity River Plays is the kind of show that gets the attention of the Pulitzer committee. Brilliant American playwright: check. Regional authenticity: check. Drama of significance: check, check. The trilogy, which made its world premiere Friday evening at the Dee and Charles Wyly Theater, is still in development, but it’s likely headed for the promised land. With some adjustments, more chiropractic than surgical, this show has a big future.

The Trinity River Plays is a partnership between the Dallas Theater Center and Chicago’s Goodman Theatre. It will migrate to the Goodman in January, after the Dallas run (and from Goodman, the aim is quite clearly Broadway). Its director, Ethan McSweeny, has staged more than 60 productions around the country, and made his Broadway debut in 2000 with the revival of Gore Vidal’s The Best Man. In other words, he’s the kind of experienced guy producers and playwrights love.

Regina Taylor, an award-winning actor and playwright who wrote the much-lauded production “Crowns,” was born in Oak Cliff. Her show is a trilogy of three plays: Jar Fly, Rain and Ghost (story), and is described as an “intensely personal” production, ostensibly borrowing from Regina Taylor’s own life. The protagonist, Iris Spears, is a young woman who escapes her dysfunctional middle-class Dallas life, and heads to New York to become an accomplished writer. The show is chock-a-block with references that will please locals, though it’s debatable, once the show leaves the Wyly, whether the plethora of mentions (inside jokes about the Trinity Bridge?) do much to advance the storytelling.

The cast: Iris is played by Karen Aldridge, who has credits as long as her very long legs; she is intelligent, poetic, and angry. Christiana Clark plays three mesmerizing incarnations of Jasmine, Iris’s cousin. Penny Johnson Jerald plays Rose, Iris’s remote, orderly mother. She’s familiar to viewers of ER, The Larry Sanders Show, 24 and has directed more than 45 plays. Jacqueline Williams, who plays Iris’s comic-tragic Aunt Daisy, has television credits as well a string of major roles in Chicago and Goodman productions. There’s nary a slouch among them.

So it’s not a shock that most of the acting in The Trinity River Plays is stellar. Likewise, the staging is inspired. The writing, in discrete clumps, is laugh-out-loud funny and smart. But for all of this, the production feels like a photograph without a focal point. The audience has the sensation of many lives, many issues, many cultural details, all of it presented by great actors. But there is an emotional disconnect, and it’s difficult to understand, at a gut level, where this show really wants us to look, or what it wants us to feel.

The set design by Tony-award winner Todd Rosenthal may be a clue to the problem. So often the power of live theater is not only what is said or shown, but what is triggered or suggested to the audience’s imagination, memory, or emotions. The jam-packed 1970s suburban house in The Trinity River Plays leaves nothing to the mind’s eye; it looks more like a scene from a television set than the stuff of the stage. The garden is a crowded border of plastic flowers and weird artificial earth. When these props play the role of the chief object of Iris’s mother’s affection and nurturing, more than what she is able to summon for her own daughter, the staging somehow insults. When it rains — real rain! — the authenticity of the water falling from the ceiling seems oddly paired with the garden, which looks much like an aisle at Michael’s. If there is messaging there, it was lost on this viewer.

Underneath this highly rendered stage of middle-class suburban life, the strong black women bury their secrets. And it is the burial of these secrets that erodes the women’s tremendous strengths. Iris, Rose, Jasmine, and Aunt Daisy all heap upon their secrets weird artificiality (like the soil?): self-mockery, whining, manipulation, pretty hats, birthday cakes, gin, drugs, and sex. Mostly, we don’t know how all of this makes them feel. We can’t connect with them, perhaps because they each are so fundamentally disconnected from their own truths.

When a show attempts to tell the tale of two generations in three plays with four main characters, plot details take on greater significance — much like they do in a crime or mystery story. We wish we knew more fully why Iris’s mother freely bestows affection upon Iris’s cousin, Jasmine, who, for two parts of the trilogy, is a no count. And why does Rose spend so much energy being tough and cold to Iris? (Rose tells Iris that she looks like her father, but is that the only reason? If Iris was a “mistake” did Rose really resent her her whole life?) Off-stage and unbeknownst to us, Iris acquires a boyfriend. We learn about this abruptly — when, how, why? — and the off-stage character, Iris’s father, as well as his relationship with Rose is a buried secret and essentially remains so. Tell us more.

These are minor holes, but they distract from Regina Taylor’s brilliant material. The Trinity River Plays is about the human spirit and the destructive power of buried and denied truths. We laugh with the sublime women in this story. If only we could have cried.

Photo: Karen Aldridge and Penny Johnson Jerald in ‘Rain.’ (Photo by Brandon Thibodeaux)

5 comments on “Theater Review: The Trinity River Plays Has Pulitzer Pedigree, But Can It Overcome Its Emotional Disconnect?

  1. Excellent analysis. There’s a “there” there, but pruning and shaping are needed to really focus the text and bring the “there” into view. Specifically, although of the language is gorgeous, Ms. Taylor must be willing to kill off some of her favorite speeches, regardless of how beautiful they are, if they aren’t needed. Also, the terrible incident in Jar Fly isn’t “earned” by the action that precedes it. Powerful as it is, and as crucial as it is to Iris’ life, it feels contrived and like it was simply a means to drive important moments later in the play. But Ms. Taylor unquestionably has created a core of characters, stories, and relationships around which to create a truly wonderful play. It just needs more work — but the core is so solid, the work is more than worth the effort. Also, the actors and the design were uniformly superb.

  2. I must agree with the lack of focus comment. One moment in the show really illustrates this. It is when the two men are sitting on the porch sharing a flash while Iris and her Aunt talk in the kitchen. The lighting focus is off and the action actually draws our attention to the two men (particularly Frank taking out a hankie to wipe off the flask, I almost lost it in what is supposed to be a tender moment) while the two females have a tender moment in the kitchen.

    I however loved the literalness of the set. But I am a HUGE fan of Rosenthal’s sets.

    But I felt that the show needs a lot of work. For me it has the problems you listed but it also goes back and forth from prose to a more lyrical almost slam poetry. As a fan of Dan Dietz I love more lyrical dialog, but to move in and out of it is like listening to an actor drop their accent every few lines.

    Mike

  3. Mike —
    1. Your snapshot is spot on. I recall that dual-scene vividly, because I blew it and was completely focused on the two men.
    2. I actually am a big fan of Rosenthal’s sets, as well, just not this one.
    3. I also noticed the third play’s noticeable shift to the lyrical, which I too love but found distracting in this instance — I kept wondering why we suddenly were listening to rhymic repetition, as if I might have missed something. Curious.
    Taylor is brilliant. The show just needs a really hard edit.

  4. Christine – Having lit many World Premiers (including one with Uptown Players here in Dallas that had this very same issue) it seems like a writer gone wild.

    Not that I blame her. She is brilliant (and as a Trekkie it was cool to see Cassidy Yates on the stage, so anything that feeds my Trek addiction is fine to me), and this play is the play every author wants to write.

    But it was just too much. Like you said, a hard edit would do the show a lot of good. There were some amazing moments, there was some very pointed and witty dialouge, but in the end it was just too much. Let a really good editor at that script with a red pen and after a couple of drafts she will be raising a Pulitzer (she might anyway, this is the type of stuff that they fall all over themselves for) and watching her show from the house at a Broadway theater. But I don’t see the show in its current form making it that far, much less succeeding.

    By the way, my wife, a mid Westerner (from southern Michigan, about 3 hours from Chicago) doesn’t think the show will fly there. In her words she was “lost for much of the first act” (because of the cicada references) and there were “large chunks that lose their power because of their regionality, that I am only beginning to understand now”. She moved here 3 years ago.

    I didn’t know if the Regionality made the play hard to follow, but I was born and bred in Dallas (Pleasant Grove). So I am not as good of a judge. She thinks that without significant rewrites the show might have trouble in Chicago.

    Mike

  5. Also, some of the B-Plots are going to have to go. The redemption of Jasmine for example. It is nice, but not necessary. In fact, I didn’t even get that she was a mother. I did see Jasmine give her mother some money at the end of the third act (a point which my wife missed and I only caught because my eyes tend to wonder a bit during long dialouge), but it seemed incomplete and unnecessary to me. This is not Jasmine’s story, I don’t see what they harm would have been in leaving her in the state we left her in during the second act.

    You can add the Jack/Frank angle to that as well.

    It is all part of there being “too much”.

    I do see your point on the set, but as a designer, I am sometimes lost in the awe of a good set, even at the expense of its actually fitting into the play. Same with a really good lighting design. I tend to give designers a bit of a pass that I probably shouldn’t. But also a bad design element can destroy a show for me (see Henry IV).

    Mike